logo crit
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- jysta
So i've done a rework on a logo graphic, something dynamic/ gone down this route. Would it come out ok in Process?? Hmmm can't decide which to send over...
Or maybe none, there're all shit ?
- SillyBilly0
two
- Antonelli0
three
- Juan_Dumplo0
2
- _salisae_0
that typeface and that graphic do not work together. also, you don't want sharp edges in your logo like that.
- that's like, your opinion maaan.anxious_arms
- hahaESPtype
- like points, you mean? the pointy part?magnificent_ruin
- it might put somebody's eye out?magnificent_ruin
- don't run with that logo!Antonelli
- do you think the graphic is totally unsuitable for process sailsae???jysta
- points fade out into nothing when faxed or reproduced – illustratively speaking it fails._salisae_
- whats a fax?m_smith
- LOLdMullins
- Hoax0
aaagh
2 or 3
- Antonelli0
is there a concept behind that graphic?
I would simplify it further. you currently have 5 swoosh things, bring it down to 3, dark gray, green, lime green.
- it looks like hair when you have so many.Antonelli
- i say the opposite, more! i want a full on parting of green and grey. maybe a quiff.Hoax
- I see flowing hairdropdown
- I guess the concept behind the graphic is (revenue stream)jysta
- I agree here. simplify the graphic and work on the text a bit morevoiceof
- canuck0
Why did you choose the green swooshy thing?
- akrokdesign0
capital looks a bit thin. they are in need of some stimulus?
- Antonelli0
looks like a graphic you'd see on a shampoo bottle...
- or hairsprayAntonelli
- simplify it.Antonelli
- its a bizarre company name, prsonally I just keep reading AGH!Hoax
- lolakrokdesign
- akrokdesign0
swooooooosh, that how your money goes. lol.
- canuck0
AGHHHH I LOST ALL MY MONIES!
- magnificent_ruin0
this is the money you could be losing with geico
- jysta0
Not my choice in name :-) Il work on some or your suggestions tho guys/ thanks
- HAYZ1LLA0
3
- zenmasterfoo0
I have to wonder, simply from the client's pov, if "capital" should be so underemphasized with the lighter font weight as well as all lowercase ( as in #2 ). The colors are nice.
- doesnotexist0
3 - maybe do a 1 and 2 spot color option for that swooshy
- 7point340
regardless this is a new contraction i've never seen before, so, you've got that going for you:
there're
- _salisae_0
and it looks like someone is on fire yelling AGHHHH
- johndiggity0
you will have massive trouble reducing the size of any of those logos.
- a tag that long should never be a part of any logo.Antonelli
- no pun intended.johndiggity
- I'll try persuade them not to include it!jysta