Opinion on logo....

• mjorge

  Hello, I would like to have some feedback on this logo I have created.

  It's for MTB club here at my village. What do u Think?

  

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• detritus0

  Looks fine enough for a village competition - have you played with the text options though? It's a bit messy as-is.

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  • Yes, I did played... U are right about behing a ittle messy....mjorge

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• max_prophet0

  I'd look at losing the blue triangle and sticking to two colours, maybe two tints of one.

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  • I tries with two colours (blue). But most of the guys with me prefer like this...mjorge

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• emecks0

  for me there are too many colours,
  the blue coming inbetween the L & H could be a lot cleaner.
  the orange cogwheel (??) looks more like orange the fruit...

  anyway that's just me :)

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  • Not a cogwheel...Disk brake. Should be clear for MTB guys....mjorge

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• Studiospooky0

  I would say its too complex overall. You have four colours, two type styles, two strong diagonals and a half-visible element all bunched into a cluster.

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  • Humm. Agree...mjorge
  • I agree too.jamble
  • Its making a nice overall shape though so its on the right track. Just needs finessing.Studiospooky
  • I thought the same, until he said it was for mountain bikers, now I think is acceptable.Coldice4678

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• i_monk0

  Too many colours.
  Is a brake the best representative of whatever MTB (mountain biking? masturbation?) is?
  Is it BT TRALHOS, or BTT RALHOS?
  Ditch the blue wedge.

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  • one T is justaposed. It's BTT TRALHOS. The overall form is nice and adequate for the event but logo shouldn't be...Corvo
  • as specific/targeted as to include incomprehensible objects like that disk. after all other people will watch it too.Corvo

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• Ampersanderson0

  I don't find the type to be the best you could do. Partly it's the type choice itself, but a lot of its problem is the spacing. I mistook the LH combo for an UH ligature at first. i_monk has a good point about readability.

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